Sorry for posting twice-in-a-day. Just wanted to let you know a prologue is now up on my Dark Empires document over on GoogleDocs. Take a look when you get a chance. Specifically, I'm wondering if it makes any sense at all. Its meant to be a little mysterious and disorienting . . . but I'm worried it goes a bit too far.
How are you guys liking making the comments over on GoogleDocs? It seems to work rather well, IMO, but what's your opinions?
Heres the link again, in case you need it:
Dark Empires: Prologue
